Bwah. I love you. Now you've made me all maudlin. Okay, I take the previous comment back. I don't love you anymore. *coughNOTcough*
But yes, the fic was brilliant, right from the start of the dialogue where you're not really sure what's going on until the last part and this - It was no good to fight, he realized, his whole it never had been. He’d never known how. And he never would learn. - part? It's like you've really taken note of Zack's character, and the whole thing was heart-wrenching and sad and also, this part ' the fierce hum-thud-slam of his furious heartbeat thrumming ceaselessly in his ears.' I really loved too.
...forgotten like a distant childhood memory. He wondered if Freddy would fade into that, too, a flavor of something wonderfully forbidden, long lost.
Gah. It's just, gah. People live for those kind of lines, you know?
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But yes, the fic was brilliant, right from the start of the dialogue where you're not really sure what's going on until the last part and this - It was no good to fight, he realized, his whole it never had been. He’d never known how. And he never would learn. - part? It's like you've really taken note of Zack's character, and the whole thing was heart-wrenching and sad and also, this part ' the fierce hum-thud-slam of his furious heartbeat thrumming ceaselessly in his ears.' I really loved too.
...forgotten like a distant childhood memory. He wondered if Freddy would fade into that, too, a flavor of something wonderfully forbidden, long lost.
Gah. It's just, gah. People live for those kind of lines, you know?
Truly, your writing skills are amazing.