ext_49337 ([identity profile] rajkumari905.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amfiguree 2009-02-28 09:28 pm (UTC)

OKAY I HAVE RETURNED TO FLAIL. AND OMGOSH. FLAAAAAAILING OKAY. EPICLY. THIS. SPECTACULARLY AWESOME. FLAILFLAILFLAIL SPAZ.

This is the part where I quote the majority of the fic back at you.

And it's really kind of, um, warm, wow, maybe warmer than when Cook grabbed him in the airport and, um.
Your Archie POV is, like, the best ever.

"What?" David says. Cook's hand is really, really warm. And kind of a little distracting.
*cracks up* KIND OF A LITTLE, HUH, ARCHIE. JUST A LITTLE?

Also, um, you're kind of the first fake boyfriend I've ever taken home, so."
Omgosh, :O. This is my shocked face.

Cook's mouth is doing that thing again, the thing where it doesn't really know which way it wants to go.
I kind of adore your Cook.

Daniel and Amber email him all the time with, like, vegetable juice recipes from his mom and stuff, and he really misses them, but it's not so bad now.
Awwwww lmao *smishes all of them*

They talk about his mom and dad some more, because they're the best parents anyone could ever ask for, and they're totally supportive of everything David's ever wanted to do. And then they talk about David's pets, and then they even talk about school, and how much David's learned, and what he's learning, and how great Jason is as a roommate, even though he smokes up all the time - "or maybe because of that," Cook smirks, and David laughs.
I LOVE RAMBLY!ARCHIE SFM. I was cracking up at pets.

*uber-intrigued about the whole suit-burning thing*
Here I was thinking that it was true, but it had been for something not-serious BUT AH, THE PLOT THICKENS.

For a second he thinks Cook is going to, like, leave, except - well, okay, he can't, since they're on a plane and stuff, but still.
LOL I can totally see Archie having an internal panic about oh no, he's leaving, and then realizing that he can't.

David's eyes widen. "Um."
I DON'T KNOW WHY THIS IS SO EPIC AND HILARIOUS BUT *DIES LAUGHING*

His fingers are so warm that the cool metal of his ring makes David's skin sort of--"We're going for a wedding."
"Um," David says, helpfully.

AHAHAHAHA UM. I LOVE HIS UMS. ESPECIALLY THE HELPFUL VARIETY. AND AHAHAHA WHAT. UMMMMMM. AND I LOVE THAT HE'S SO AWARE OF COOK'S HANDS AND RING AND WHAT NOT. BUT MOST OF ALL I LOVE "Um," David says, helpfully. BECAUSE THAT IS EPIC !!!!!!!

And later, it turns out that sharing half a bottle of champagne is actually a really good idea. It makes David forget about the fact that his parents - who are waiting to pick him up from the airport - don't know he's bringing anyone (cook) (a man) with him.
LOVE THE PARENTHESES. AND THAT FIRST SENTENCE. EPIC AWESOME LOVE.

"He's my, um--" and he is totally not worried about saying it. "My--"
So much love for your Archie voice.

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