i read this the day it was posted but didn't have time to comment but i'm commenting now! :D

i read the part 1 of this story like forever ago and i thought you're never gonna update! (so when i scan through the community and saw 'ordinary love story' i didn't even think for one second it's this story!!! and was completely hyper) this is so good, all very original and all very realistic. and LOL at cook's dinner with archuleta parents. he was faking it too awesome-ly.

keep it up and please for the love of god write more cuz i really like this story