if i commented on every little thing i loved about this fic, it would take like, 135983498 comments, so, lemme just say:
you wrote believable (well, as believable as something impossible can be! hahah), gorgeous, laugh-out-loud, then-promptly-cry-all-over-my-face, hearts-in-my-eyes, flail-worthy MPREG.
girrrrrrl.
write that, and you can write ANYTHING. *____*
i love that cook is the pregnant one, because archie falls so fantastically well into the category of nurse/caretaker/prebornbabysitter. also, i LOVE the way you write beth. seriously. love. and andreeeeew, oh man, i love to see the ways that people write him in fic, and yours is just hilarious and spot-on. and the neeeeal -- i love the NEAL. and just -- GUH.
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you wrote believable (well, as believable as something impossible can be! hahah), gorgeous, laugh-out-loud, then-promptly-cry-all-over-my-face, hearts-in-my-eyes, flail-worthy MPREG.
girrrrrrl.
write that, and you can write ANYTHING. *____*
i love that cook is the pregnant one, because archie falls so fantastically well into the category of nurse/caretaker/prebornbabysitter. also, i LOVE the way you write beth. seriously. love. and andreeeeew, oh man, i love to see the ways that people write him in fic, and yours is just hilarious and spot-on. and the neeeeal -- i love the NEAL. and just -- GUH.
YOU ARE AMAZING. END OF DISCUSSION. HI.