there is -- there is genuinely not a cookleta fic that i love more than this one. i had to leave the computer after i read this, because i didn't wanna give feedback that consisted of nothing but "sdlfkdsjkfjdlfkj OMG OMG OMG NAT" (although i will probably squeeze some of that in here anyway!).
prologue - i cannot even DESCRIBE to you how spot-on your cook voice is. like, i ENVY you for being able to write him like that. "We're just, uh, we're in a good place right now, you know? I don't want to jinx it." i can IMAGINE him saying this, and not just the words, but the expression he'd have when he said it, the lopsided smirk and everything. even from reading just the prologue, i was like, "yeah, i need to clear all my plans for today and read this fic repeatedly."
i. - i was honestly sort of confused at the beginning of this one. it was a situation where i was like, "um, i'm not exactly sure what's going on, but i like it, so i'm gonna keep reading it!", and once it hit me, i was like OH MY GOD THAT IS UNREAL, and went back to re-read it from the beginning. i was so SAD when this one ended, because i just -- Archie stares at it some more, throat working, mouth moving, soundlessly, and when David reaches for him again, he chokes out, "I didn't forget.", <333333
ii. - i don't even...i don't even UNDERSTAND how anyone could possibly be this clever with a fic, with the pictures and the captions and ALMOST AN ENTIRE CHAPTER IN TWITTER CONVERSATIONS, WHAT. and your closing lines just SLAY ME everytime, JESUS.
iii. - there is absolutely nothing that kills me more than the idea of david cook having a little girl. ask anyone! especially meg, who i made write me daddy!cook fic, because it just -- it is DAVID COOK with a LITTLE GIRL and if i can't have it in real life yet, having it in fic just makes my heart swell and my eyes tear up and i literally just sat here and squealed and clutched my heart and died. and, jfc, ARCHIE AS A KINDERGARTEN TEACHER, yes, it's so perfect, and just. i honestly had to put cookleta on the back burner for this chapter, just so i could fully wrap my mind around cook and his daughter. i can't even, just. i could quote so many parts at you and explain how they made my heart flutter, but. that'd just be annoying, i think. in conclusion: ♥_♥ x 34093804938498294803294
(starting a second comment, 'cause this is getting long as hell. and apologies for the faily html in the original comment. oops!)
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Date: 2009-06-12 01:55 am (UTC)prologue - i cannot even DESCRIBE to you how spot-on your cook voice is. like, i ENVY you for being able to write him like that. "We're just, uh, we're in a good place right now, you know? I don't want to jinx it." i can IMAGINE him saying this, and not just the words, but the expression he'd have when he said it, the lopsided smirk and everything. even from reading just the prologue, i was like, "yeah, i need to clear all my plans for today and read this fic repeatedly."
i. - i was honestly sort of confused at the beginning of this one. it was a situation where i was like, "um, i'm not exactly sure what's going on, but i like it, so i'm gonna keep reading it!", and once it hit me, i was like OH MY GOD THAT IS UNREAL, and went back to re-read it from the beginning. i was so SAD when this one ended, because i just -- Archie stares at it some more, throat working, mouth moving, soundlessly, and when David reaches for him again, he chokes out, "I didn't forget.", <333333
ii. - i don't even...i don't even UNDERSTAND how anyone could possibly be this clever with a fic, with the pictures and the captions and ALMOST AN ENTIRE CHAPTER IN TWITTER CONVERSATIONS, WHAT. and your closing lines just SLAY ME everytime, JESUS.
iii. - there is absolutely nothing that kills me more than the idea of david cook having a little girl. ask anyone! especially meg, who i made write me daddy!cook fic, because it just -- it is DAVID COOK with a LITTLE GIRL and if i can't have it in real life yet, having it in fic just makes my heart swell and my eyes tear up and i literally just sat here and squealed and clutched my heart and died. and, jfc, ARCHIE AS A KINDERGARTEN TEACHER, yes, it's so perfect, and just. i honestly had to put cookleta on the back burner for this chapter, just so i could fully wrap my mind around cook and his daughter. i can't even, just. i could quote so many parts at you and explain how they made my heart flutter, but. that'd just be annoying, i think. in conclusion: ♥_♥ x 34093804938498294803294
(starting a second comment, 'cause this is getting long as hell. and apologies for the faily html in the original comment. oops!)