Cook being all lonely without Archie. I LOVE HOW COOK TURNED AND ASKED FOR ARCHIE'S ADVICE INSTINCTIVELY, only to realise Archie isn't there :( Poor Cook.
shit, just archie being so ninja subtle, then jared and dean gives him away, and cook tries to solve it, and THEN THE ENTIRE FREAKING BATHROOM SCENE.
THE LOCK THAT DIDN'T WORK, I love how you worked that into the conversation then into the plot so amazingly. Then OMG, Cook is in the bathroom WITH Archie, OMG.
I can't wait to read more, and I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THE DEVELOPMENT IN THIS CHAPTER.
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Date: 2009-08-01 04:05 pm (UTC)THIS IS SO FREAKING AWESOME.
Cook being all lonely without Archie. I LOVE HOW COOK TURNED AND ASKED FOR ARCHIE'S ADVICE INSTINCTIVELY, only to realise Archie isn't there :( Poor Cook.
shit, just archie being so ninja subtle, then jared and dean gives him away, and cook tries to solve it, and THEN THE ENTIRE FREAKING BATHROOM SCENE.
THE LOCK THAT DIDN'T WORK, I love how you worked that into the conversation then into the plot so amazingly. Then OMG, Cook is in the bathroom WITH Archie, OMG.
I can't wait to read more, and I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THE DEVELOPMENT IN THIS CHAPTER.
SO AWESOME.