I am... a little confused, but I think I got it for the most part. Mostly, I am in awe of the emotional punch you pack into so few words. It's just, David's confusion,(nothing, nothing, nothing like before), and Cook's fighting himself, "just once, David, fuck." They build up into this intensity that neither of them can deny.
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Date: 2009-09-11 07:02 pm (UTC)Lovely as usual. :)