I vaguely recall both you and Meg making small Battle of the Bands-esque AUs (okay, Meg's was with Archie as Cook's drummer? iirc), so possibly this made more sense to me in that context rather than out of it.
This works for me as a prologue, babe (Maybe that's where it starts). It was kind of choppy, but your prose is as lovely as over, I love how you are ratcheting up the hotness, and although I want to smack your fricking HornySlutCook I still find him irresistable, and I realise this is your intention, LOL.
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Date: 2009-09-14 09:37 am (UTC)This works for me as a prologue, babe (Maybe that's where it starts). It was kind of choppy, but your prose is as lovely as over, I love how you are ratcheting up the hotness, and although I want to smack your fricking HornySlutCook I still find him irresistable, and I realise this is your intention, LOL.