Ah yes, a lovely dose of the way it should have been... This was beautiful, I really enjoyed it; would love to see you write more for the fandom... who am I kidding... not for the fandom in general, only for the Jacob/Bella part pls thx.
I especially liked this line from Jake:
"I was kind of hoping I'd run out of competition."
It's so wonderfully, matter-of-factly, earthily him.
I also loved Bella explaining at he end how there's no middle ground with Edward, but it's different with Jake, because their relationship was built in layers rather than poofed into being.
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Date: 2010-01-08 07:29 am (UTC)I especially liked this line from Jake:
"I was kind of hoping I'd run out of competition."
It's so wonderfully, matter-of-factly, earthily him.
I also loved Bella explaining at he end how there's no middle ground with Edward, but it's different with Jake, because their relationship was built in layers rather than poofed into being.
Thanks for posting! (And welcome to