Like All Good Fairytales (7/7)
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epilogue: and they lived happily ever after
Ten minutes before the interview concludes, David is interrupted by a phone call. In a move that should be unprofessional but is instead strangely endearing, he promises me ten additional minutes of his time before excusing himself to take the call.
He's smiling when he returns, and apologizes for holding us up.
"Dinner plans?" I ask, trying to sound casual.
I clearly fail, because David refuses to elaborate further, apart from shooting me a sly grin and saying, "Something like that."
We finish the interview amicably. David has plenty of anecdotes to share from the time he's spent on tour, and with his family. He remains notoriously tight-lipped about his relationship, only saying, "He's great. Some days I wish we were out, so we could do things together, like see a movie, or go out for dinner. But it's, uh, it's a trade-off, I guess, and so far we've had a really good run."
All too soon, my time is up.
Judging from the fact that David's first priority, once he's thanked me, is to sneak into the men's room with his cell phone, I'm going to say that "a really good run" is probably a vast understatement.
I may not know who the lucky leading man is, but I'm pretty sure this romance ends with castles, horses and riding off into the sunset.
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Date: 2009-06-11 08:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-26 06:24 am (UTC)i'm so, so glad you enjoyed this, bb. thank you so much for taking the time to let me know, even with the big exam looming! ♥
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Date: 2009-06-11 09:07 pm (UTC)you know i love all of it, right? the parts i've already read before, the asia tour and the daughter one, you know that i love it and even the ones i hadn't read, the one with the fighting, oh jesus christ that nearly killed me and i was already close to tears when i was done with it, and then you went into the last one and
oh god, natalie, i can't even tell you how hard i was crying but i just kept blinking through it because i had to keep reading and finding out more and all of the little things, the moments between them and how they met and everything, it was so perfect and beautiful and just -- right. everything was right and i want that so badly, i want it, and you -- just, you. you're so amazing, and this is so beautiful, all of it.
i love you. i really, really do.
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Date: 2009-06-11 09:06 pm (UTC)This is such a brilliant story, and I love all the AI alum that you wrote in as supporting characters. This is like my dream come true, getting to see their relationship explored in so many different ways.
I love this so much. Thank you!
♥♥
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Date: 2009-06-11 10:09 pm (UTC)aslfmslgsdskf FREAKING indescribable. I loved every chapter, every sentence, every scenario. And I'm sad to see it end. D: I LOVE this sfm though. It's a masterpiece, like everything you write.
You rock my socks, darl. ♥
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Date: 2009-06-11 11:15 pm (UTC)It is just so gosh darn LOVELY that you managed to capture these two in different lifetimes, but still nailed who they were and still managed to weave their very different lives together.
I just, gosh, I loved every single one of them. The way you wrote Cook, the way you wrote Archie, the....EVERYTHING! Guh.
In fact, I will probably spend the rest of today, tomorrow, and who knows maybe all of next week, grinning from ear to ear because of all of the Cookleta love that was in these, and the fact that they were all done so perfectly.
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Date: 2009-06-12 12:48 am (UTC)It was just beautifully breathtaking and I'm so happy you decided to post it.
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Date: 2009-06-26 07:04 am (UTC)i am so glad you liked it! thank you for sticking with it all the way through and for the lovely fb. i don't know if i would have posted if it hadn't been for all of you and your awesomeness. ♥ ♥ ♥
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Date: 2009-06-12 01:55 am (UTC)prologue - i cannot even DESCRIBE to you how spot-on your cook voice is. like, i ENVY you for being able to write him like that. "We're just, uh, we're in a good place right now, you know? I don't want to jinx it." i can IMAGINE him saying this, and not just the words, but the expression he'd have when he said it, the lopsided smirk and everything. even from reading just the prologue, i was like, "yeah, i need to clear all my plans for today and read this fic repeatedly."
i. - i was honestly sort of confused at the beginning of this one. it was a situation where i was like, "um, i'm not exactly sure what's going on, but i like it, so i'm gonna keep reading it!", and once it hit me, i was like OH MY GOD THAT IS UNREAL, and went back to re-read it from the beginning. i was so SAD when this one ended, because i just -- Archie stares at it some more, throat working, mouth moving, soundlessly, and when David reaches for him again, he chokes out, "I didn't forget.", <333333
ii. - i don't even...i don't even UNDERSTAND how anyone could possibly be this clever with a fic, with the pictures and the captions and ALMOST AN ENTIRE CHAPTER IN TWITTER CONVERSATIONS, WHAT. and your closing lines just SLAY ME everytime, JESUS.
iii. - there is absolutely nothing that kills me more than the idea of david cook having a little girl. ask anyone! especially meg, who i made write me daddy!cook fic, because it just -- it is DAVID COOK with a LITTLE GIRL and if i can't have it in real life yet, having it in fic just makes my heart swell and my eyes tear up and i literally just sat here and squealed and clutched my heart and died. and, jfc, ARCHIE AS A KINDERGARTEN TEACHER, yes, it's so perfect, and just. i honestly had to put cookleta on the back burner for this chapter, just so i could fully wrap my mind around cook and his daughter. i can't even, just. i could quote so many parts at you and explain how they made my heart flutter, but. that'd just be annoying, i think. in conclusion: ♥_♥ x 34093804938498294803294
(starting a second comment, 'cause this is getting long as hell. and apologies for the faily html in the original comment. oops!)
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Date: 2009-06-12 02:23 am (UTC)v. - i don't even -- i don't even know what to SAY, just. archie and cook signing, and all of archie's signing STILL being in his voice, and the idols reuniting and the proposal and christ, i was so emotional over this one that after i finished the entire thing, i just wanted to stay in that world with them forever and never read the epilogue. my heart, nat. my heart.
epilogue - In a move that should be unprofessional but is instead strangely endearing, he promises me ten additional minutes of his time before excusing himself to take the call. - god, that is so cook, to make everyone fall in love with him even when he's doing something that would seem douchey coming from other celebrities. once again, your cook voice is fucking perfect, and i cannot even comprehend how well this entire thing was written.
i just, i want to make it a routine in my day to read this AT LEAST ONCE for the rest of my days on earth just because it is so beautiful and heart-wrenchingly terrific, and every single story was stand-alone but the entire work came together cohesively and, i just don't even know what to say except for thank you, thank you for writing this and sharing it and pushing through it even when things seemed insurmountable, and just, <33333
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Date: 2009-06-26 06:52 am (UTC)again, thank you so much for reading this, and for the lovely feedback!
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Date: 2009-06-12 03:15 am (UTC)becca (9:22:08 PM): SPEAKING OF READING
becca (9:22:11 PM): READ
becca (9:22:12 PM): NAT'S
becca (9:22:13 PM): FIC
becca (9:22:28 PM): IT'S 21,000 WORDS, MADE ME CRY, IT'S AN EPIC AU
toni (9:23:05 PM): OMG IS IT SAD?
toni (9:23:17 PM): OMG I LOVE HER WRITING BUT I WONT BE ABLE TO READ IT IF IT HAS A SAD ENDING BB
becca (9:23:19 PM): NO IT'S BEAUTIFUL
toni (9:23:22 PM): OH GOOD
becca (9:23:25 PM): IT IS
becca (9:23:26 PM): SO EPIC
becca (9:24:17 PM): IT IS. INCREDIBLE.
toni (9:34:57 PM): "I guess I can stand looking like a preppy school boy for one night," he says, good-naturedly.
"Um," Archie says, as he follows David out the door. "I - don't schools have, like, age limits or something?"
toni (9:34:59 PM): AHAHAHAHAHA
toni (9:35:00 PM): NAILED.
becca (9:35:20 PM): OMG THIS FIC <333
toni (9:37:09 PM): why is this a table for one, why does the guy react like david is talking to himself
toni (9:37:20 PM): why is david ordering for one
toni (9:37:36 PM): *FREAKS OUT*
becca (9:38:03 PM): I DIDN'T UNDERSTAND IT
becca (9:38:05 PM): IT WILL HIT YOU
becca (9:38:07 PM): VERY SOON
becca (9:38:13 PM): AND THEN YOU'LL HAVE TO RE-READ WHAT YOU'VE ALREADY READ
toni (9:38:47 PM): CLEARLY ARCHIE APPARENTLY ISN'T THERE THOUGH
toni (9:38:48 PM): IS HE DEAD
becca (9:39:29 PM): JUST KEEP READING
toni (9:41:09 PM): "Yeah," Jason agrees. "The whole 'I'm dating a guy that only I can see' thing is getting pretty old, man."
toni (9:41:11 PM): AHHHHH
toni (9:48:07 PM): OH MY GOD I'M SO GLAD HE WASNT DEAD
toni (9:48:09 PM): AUGH ;o;
zip (9:48:15 PM): TONI
zip (9:48:19 PM): SPOILER ALERT
toni (9:48:31 PM): I'M SORRY BUT I'M SO NOT SORRY
becca (9:49:30 PM): TONI
becca (9:49:33 PM): I HAVE TO TELL YOU
becca (9:49:38 PM): THAT AU #3 IS MY FAVORITE
becca (9:49:45 PM): AND I THINK YOU'LL ENJOY IT TOO
toni (10:15:14 PM): omg Becca
toni (10:15:21 PM): I love you so much right now
rach (10:15:28 PM): *waves*
toni (10:15:40 PM): sorry, I'm reading really really awesome fanfic that Becca linked
toni (10:15:44 PM): and I might be flailing
rach (10:15:47 PM): ooohhhh
toni (10:15:49 PM): part 4 just about tore me up
toni (10:16:02 PM): I HAVE A WEAKNESS FOR COOK WITH CHILD OKAY
becca (10:17:04 PM): I TOLD YOU
becca (10:17:20 PM): I TOLD YOU THAT AU #3 (OR, I GUESS IT'S PART 4 BUT TECHNICALLY AU #3) WAS THE GREATEST
becca (10:17:22 PM): SDFLSKDFJLKDFJDFJ
becca (10:17:25 PM): IT IS SO AMAZING, JESUS.
toni (10:19:28 PM): AHHHHH
toni (10:19:31 PM): JUST IT REALLY IS
becca (10:23:19 PM): this fic is everything that is good and right in the world
toni (10:37:45 PM): OMG HE'S DEAF
toni (10:37:46 PM): sorry
becca (10:37:49 PM): I KNOW
toni (10:37:54 PM): I love getting huge flashes of insight
becca (10:37:55 PM): DID YOU READ THAT WHOLE CHAPTER
toni (10:38:00 PM): NOT YET
rach (10:38:01 PM): which one of them?
becca (10:38:01 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:02 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:03 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:03 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:05 PM): IT'S AMAZING
toni (10:38:11 PM): OKAY OKAY HOLD ON I'M READING
becca (10:38:21 PM): (also, how RIDICULOUSLY HOT AND ANGSTY was professor/student?!?!)
toni (10:38:50 PM): MY FIRST CLUE SHOULD HAVE BEEN HIS SOUNDLESS LAUGH
toni (10:39:02 PM): BECAUSE I ACTUALLY THOUGHT TO MYSELF AS I READ IT THAT ARCHIE NEVER EVER LAUGHS SOUNDLESSLY
becca (10:41:48 PM): i love that with every new chapter, you don't know what's going on, but then it just unfolds in your mind without her ever telling you THIS IS WHAT'S HAPPENING: *EXPLAINS*
toni (10:43:32 PM): IKRRRRR
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Date: 2009-06-12 03:15 am (UTC)toni (10:54:22 PM): OH MY FUCKING GOD BECCA
toni (10:54:24 PM): THAT
toni (10:54:25 PM): AHHHH
becca (10:54:27 PM): RIGHT?!?!?!?
toni (10:54:28 PM): THAT THAT THAT
toni (10:54:30 PM): AHHHHHHH
becca (10:54:30 PM): FAVORITE
becca (10:54:31 PM): COOKLETA
becca (10:54:32 PM): FIC
becca (10:54:32 PM): EVER
toni (10:54:35 PM): OH MY GOD
becca (10:54:42 PM): I CRIED
becca (10:54:45 PM): AND I SQUEALED
toni (10:54:45 PM): OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE BEST ONE SO FAR, I'M GOING TO LIKE, SOB
becca (10:54:50 PM): I DID THAT
becca (10:54:54 PM): WELL, I DIDN'T SOB
becca (10:55:00 PM): BUT I TEARED UP QUITE A BIT AND THEN HAD TO DO SOME DABBING
becca (10:55:06 PM): SO AS NOT TO LET THE TEARS FALL
toni (10:55:07 PM): OH MY GOOOOD
becca (10:55:09 PM): ESPECIALLY WHEN COOK
becca (10:55:11 PM): HAD A FUCKING
becca (10:55:11 PM): DAUGHTER
becca (10:55:27 PM): WHICH IS MY #1 THING EVER SLDJFLKDFJLKDSFJLKJFK, AND THEN DEAF ARCHIE AND THE PROPOSAL JESUS CHRIST
becca (10:56:02 PM): AND, ALSO, THE CHAPTER IN TWITTER CONVERSATIONS WHATTTTTT
toni (10:56:03 PM): OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
toni (10:56:14 PM): I DON'T KNOW HOW TO RESPOND TO THIS
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Date: 2009-06-12 03:16 am (UTC)I...I don't even know which one my favorite is, but I'm pretty sure that last one pretty much killed me. It was just so gorgeous. SO GORGEOUS.
I don't even have proper words to express how wonderful this truly was and how much I loved it. It was absolutely brilliant.
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Date: 2009-06-12 04:22 am (UTC)You're brilliant, do you know that?!? These were all so good, and just exemplify that eternal push and pull between Cook and Archie. I enjoyed the first three a great deal. Especially Archie as a kindergarten teacher. I could totally see that. And he's so great with kids. And that moment when they finally meet, and they're all sort of stunned, and like "Hi...", and the blushing and stuff. Yeah, that's the good stuff.
I had a really hard time with the fourth one. You totally did your job portraying a relationship in crisis, but man, Cook was just such an asshole in that one. I didn't even care that he was suffering, and being stubborn, because he was causing so much of it himself. Even if he felt conflicted over whether they should be together, or not, what with the gap between their ages, and the ethics of professor/student dynamics, he was still behaving *appallingly*. So you did your job there, and showed how even when he wanted to walk away, he couldn't fight the overwhelming attraction he felt for Archie. It was a real power-house, but it made my stomach-muscles clench, so I was ready for some love, and happy times.
And you delivered. And #5 just illustrated how, even though they have a mutual love for music, what really seems to pull them together, as friends, is beyond that. Cook is constantly referring, in interviews, to the fact that Archie is one of the most genuine people he knows, and how he's such a good person. I think that there are so many qualities that they each admire about the other, that even if you take music out of the equation, they would still find one another, and still share their love of music in an indirect way. Take away Archie's hearing and you still have the humour, and affection, and understanding that you have in this world. And Cook was his usual magnificent self, and I adored him so much here. And the fact that it united the BoUH, and both families, was a winner. This made me cry tears of joy, it affected me so. And Cook does so love his grand gestures, doesn't he?? Love them both sooooooooooo much. And you. Hee.
Job well done, BB. I'm just about to fall asleep at the keyboard here, so I hope that the above comment makes *some kind of sense*. Just know that I loved them all, and this is something that I'll have to come back to, again and again. So good night, and bon voyage. Safe journey on your travels. I hope that you see many wonderful things. I can't wait to hear all about it. Many thanks for posting before leaving. It really is much appreciated. Good night now. :)
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Date: 2009-06-26 07:25 am (UTC)thank you so much again, my dear, especially for staying up to type this out despite the exhaustion! <33333333333
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Date: 2009-06-12 06:01 am (UTC)the prologue... ah that got my eyes stuck on the screen even when i have to get some sleep because i'll be going back to work in a few hours but no... i had to read and will have to rely on red bull later....
I - oh man..i'd have to be honest, me being slow had kinda made me o_O at the beginning and was already hinting on archie being either invisible or a ghost and there you go...he was a ghost and my gosh my heart was bleeding at the part when archie had gone missing for weeks and my heart nearly leaped out of my chest when cook opened the door to see archie there...oh gosh this is absolutely beautiful.
II - oh...oh... i'm so moved by this. the tweeter was a brilliant idea. and thank you for taking me on a personally guided asian tour. i probably saved lots of money, seeing asia from the comfort of my own computer chair. lol. but this was totally moving. so romantic.
III - my heart melted into a pile of unrecognizable substance (nevermind, ignore that) at this one. cook as a daddy just steals my heart away and oh my i like to hug them both. the connection archie and cook had just through phone calls was amazingly explored.
IV - denial never protects you from the heartache cook! this was remarkably written. i could so see the scenes play before me. a professor and his student. professor tries so hard to put up a wall regardless of how he feels and the student who bears the treatment and finally caves in. oh..my heart...my heart.
V - i've left comments for this already...
and here is where i make my exit. thank you so much for sharing this. with all the things that's happening to me lately, a touch of fairy tale is all i needed to bring the smile back into my heart. may we all live happily ever after.
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Date: 2009-06-12 01:11 pm (UTC)Nat, I don't even have words to tell you how COMPLETELY AMAZING this whole thing is alskfjldfkjdslfkj I love it SO much. It's just, seriously <33333333333333333333333333333. And Cook with his cell phone and and I JUST DON'T EVEN KNOW EXCEPT LOVE.
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Date: 2009-06-13 02:01 am (UTC)I'll try to leave some more constructive thoughts later, but honestly, I think you ROCKED it and it's A-FUCKING-MAZING.
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