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epilogue: and they lived happily ever after


Ten minutes before the interview concludes, David is interrupted by a phone call. In a move that should be unprofessional but is instead strangely endearing, he promises me ten additional minutes of his time before excusing himself to take the call.

He's smiling when he returns, and apologizes for holding us up.

"Dinner plans?" I ask, trying to sound casual.

I clearly fail, because David refuses to elaborate further, apart from shooting me a sly grin and saying, "Something like that."

We finish the interview amicably. David has plenty of anecdotes to share from the time he's spent on tour, and with his family. He remains notoriously tight-lipped about his relationship, only saying, "He's great. Some days I wish we were out, so we could do things together, like see a movie, or go out for dinner. But it's, uh, it's a trade-off, I guess, and so far we've had a really good run."

All too soon, my time is up.

Judging from the fact that David's first priority, once he's thanked me, is to sneak into the men's room with his cell phone, I'm going to say that "a really good run" is probably a vast understatement.

I may not know who the lucky leading man is, but I'm pretty sure this romance ends with castles, horses and riding off into the sunset.
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Date: 2009-06-11 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodbelieve.livejournal.com
Aaaaaaaaah, oh my gosh, so I totally was going to promise myself this as a reward after my exam tomorrow but I couldn't wait, oh my gosh. I think you broke my heart and put it all back together again, this is so beautiful. I love all the different universes and the way they all work (and the actual twitter accounts, omg) and just -- I may leave you a more coherent comment later? But this is amazing ♥

Date: 2009-06-26 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh my gosh, FIRST COMMENT ON THE END AND IT WAS FROM YOU. i don't even think you know how flattered i was/am! (ALSO I HOPE YOUR EXAM WENT WELL, I AM SORRY I WAS A DISTRACTION!)

i'm so, so glad you enjoyed this, bb. thank you so much for taking the time to let me know, even with the big exam looming! ♥

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Date: 2009-06-11 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hopefulgenius.livejournal.com
oh my god, natalie, i can't even -- i'm trembling over here, and i

you know i love all of it, right? the parts i've already read before, the asia tour and the daughter one, you know that i love it and even the ones i hadn't read, the one with the fighting, oh jesus christ that nearly killed me and i was already close to tears when i was done with it, and then you went into the last one and

oh god, natalie, i can't even tell you how hard i was crying but i just kept blinking through it because i had to keep reading and finding out more and all of the little things, the moments between them and how they met and everything, it was so perfect and beautiful and just -- right. everything was right and i want that so badly, i want it, and you -- just, you. you're so amazing, and this is so beautiful, all of it.

i love you. i really, really do.

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Date: 2009-06-11 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] al-hazel.livejournal.com
I adore all the AUs, how the Davids are together in every single one of them, no matter how different they are.

This is such a brilliant story, and I love all the AI alum that you wrote in as supporting characters. This is like my dream come true, getting to see their relationship explored in so many different ways.

I love this so much. Thank you!

♥♥

Date: 2009-06-26 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh my gosh, thank you for sticking the whole ride out, and for all the awesome feedback you've been leaving, seriously. it's just - the response to this story has been such an amazing surprise. <333

Date: 2009-06-11 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penrith1.livejournal.com
Just a wonderful collection. Thank you so much for posting.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
thank you so much for reading! and for leaving feedback. it's meant so much. :)

Date: 2009-06-11 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asweetdownfall.livejournal.com
Oh my god, Nat, this was just..

aslfmslgsdskf FREAKING indescribable. I loved every chapter, every sentence, every scenario. And I'm sad to see it end. D: I LOVE this sfm though. It's a masterpiece, like everything you write.

You rock my socks, darl. ♥

Date: 2009-06-26 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
and you rock mine, bb, for all the encouragement and the praise and just, everything, idek. i'm at such a loss for words. i'm just glad i got to share this with y'all, and all your reactions. it's been an awesome ride. <333

Date: 2009-06-11 10:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] japanimecrazed.livejournal.com
This is awesome. I'm amazed that all the scenarios are so different but all the Davids are themselves. Also, the pictures were totally cool.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
thank you so much! i'm really glad you enjoyed this!

Date: 2009-06-11 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] james-padfoot.livejournal.com
HOLY FREAKING SHIITAKE MUSHROOMS OKAY THIS IS LIKE MY CAPSLOCK SQUEE COMMENT BROUGHT OVER FROM THE LAST STORY WHICH HAS BEEN IMMEDIATELY MADE MY MOST FAVORITE STORY EVER EVER EVER YOU DONT EVEN UNDERSTAND I THINK, HOW MUCH I FREAKING LOVE IT AND IT JUST IT JUST I CANT EVEN YOU DONT KNOW OKAY AND I LOVE EVERYTHING EVERYSINGLE THING EVENT HOUGH I GOT CONFUSED AT FIRST BECAUSE THE FIRST STORY AND THE SECOND ONE DIDNT MATCH BUT I OBVS MISSED THE AN NOTE BECAUSE DIFFERENT UNIVERSES BUT THEN MY GOD EACH ONE WAS SO DIFFERENT BUT BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING AND OH MY GOD I CANT I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO RESPOND BECAUSE HOLY SHIT I KINDA JUST WANT TO CURL UP IN A CORNER AND CRY AND CRY AND CRY AND I WANNA SAY THAT IS BECAUSE ITS 6.16AM AND I HAVENT SLEPT AND I HAVE TO BE OUTTA HERE BY 11 AND THERE IS NO SLEEP FOR ME EXCEPT I CANT BECAUSE ITS NOT EVEN THAT ITS THAT YOURE SO AMAZING AND THESE FICS MY GOD THEYRE AMAZING AND THEN THE LAST ONE I CANNOT GET IT OUT OF MY HEAD IT JUST MY GOD OYU HAVE NO IDEA. NO IDEA.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
LMFAO OH MY GOSH I AM SORRY I CONTRIBUTED TO YOUR SLEEP DEPRIVATION. *CUDDLES YOU SO HARD* BUT AT THE SAME TIME YOU HAVE LEFT THE SWEETEST COMMENTS EVER, THANK YOU SO MUCH, I AM JUST SO PLEASED THAT YOU ENJOYED READING THIS STORY. <3333333333333333 IT MAKES THE STRUGGLE SO, SO WORTH IT.

Date: 2009-06-11 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deadlysunrise.livejournal.com
-squeals-

It is just so gosh darn LOVELY that you managed to capture these two in different lifetimes, but still nailed who they were and still managed to weave their very different lives together.

I just, gosh, I loved every single one of them. The way you wrote Cook, the way you wrote Archie, the....EVERYTHING! Guh.

In fact, I will probably spend the rest of today, tomorrow, and who knows maybe all of next week, grinning from ear to ear because of all of the Cookleta love that was in these, and the fact that they were all done so perfectly.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh my gosh, that's such a lovely thing to hear! hee! thank you so much for reading, and for all the awesome feedback. i'm just glad you've enjoyed this as much as you have!

Date: 2009-06-12 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] littlebuttercup.livejournal.com
Oh my God, Nat, that was probably the greatest fic I've ever read. Greatest five fic? I don't know. It was wonderful and beautifully written, and each one inspired such different emotions (the last two nearly brought me to tears for two completely different reasons, it was wonderful) and I love love love that both Davids are subtly (or not so) different, because their past and experiences have shaped them a little differently.

It was just beautifully breathtaking and I'm so happy you decided to post it.

Date: 2009-06-26 07:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
lsfjdsdjsg jennaaaaaaaaaaaa~

i am so glad you liked it! thank you for sticking with it all the way through and for the lovely fb. i don't know if i would have posted if it hadn't been for all of you and your awesomeness. ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2009-06-12 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mutinous.livejournal.com
i'm a huge fan of aus, so seeing this posted made my day. i loved all your universes, and how the boys were different in each yet still the same at heart. the way you presented this was really clever and lovely, thanks for sharing it with us.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
i really love aus myself, so this was a lot of fun to write -- thank you so much for the feedback, and for sticking the whole ride out with me! :)

Date: 2009-06-12 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fallenangels607.livejournal.com
there is -- there is genuinely not a cookleta fic that i love more than this one. i had to leave the computer after i read this, because i didn't wanna give feedback that consisted of nothing but "sdlfkdsjkfjdlfkj OMG OMG OMG NAT" (although i will probably squeeze some of that in here anyway!).

prologue - i cannot even DESCRIBE to you how spot-on your cook voice is. like, i ENVY you for being able to write him like that. "We're just, uh, we're in a good place right now, you know? I don't want to jinx it." i can IMAGINE him saying this, and not just the words, but the expression he'd have when he said it, the lopsided smirk and everything. even from reading just the prologue, i was like, "yeah, i need to clear all my plans for today and read this fic repeatedly."

i. - i was honestly sort of confused at the beginning of this one. it was a situation where i was like, "um, i'm not exactly sure what's going on, but i like it, so i'm gonna keep reading it!", and once it hit me, i was like OH MY GOD THAT IS UNREAL, and went back to re-read it from the beginning. i was so SAD when this one ended, because i just -- Archie stares at it some more, throat working, mouth moving, soundlessly, and when David reaches for him again, he chokes out, "I didn't forget.", <333333

ii. - i don't even...i don't even UNDERSTAND how anyone could possibly be this clever with a fic, with the pictures and the captions and ALMOST AN ENTIRE CHAPTER IN TWITTER CONVERSATIONS, WHAT. and your closing lines just SLAY ME everytime, JESUS.

iii. - there is absolutely nothing that kills me more than the idea of david cook having a little girl. ask anyone! especially meg, who i made write me daddy!cook fic, because it just -- it is DAVID COOK with a LITTLE GIRL and if i can't have it in real life yet, having it in fic just makes my heart swell and my eyes tear up and i literally just sat here and squealed and clutched my heart and died. and, jfc, ARCHIE AS A KINDERGARTEN TEACHER, yes, it's so perfect, and just. i honestly had to put cookleta on the back burner for this chapter, just so i could fully wrap my mind around cook and his daughter. i can't even, just. i could quote so many parts at you and explain how they made my heart flutter, but. that'd just be annoying, i think. in conclusion: ♥_♥ x 34093804938498294803294

(starting a second comment, 'cause this is getting long as hell. and apologies for the faily html in the original comment. oops!)

Date: 2009-06-12 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fallenangels607.livejournal.com
iv. - this chapter was so perfect, in the sense that it actually made me UNCOMFORTABLE, as the reader. but i realized after a while, that that was the purpose! i felt like i was intruding on something the whole way through, like i shouldn't have been allowed to witness this struggle between david and david. even the scorching parts made me feel like i shouldn't have been reading, just because, jfc, the angst was so PALPABLE, jesus it was amazing.

v. - i don't even -- i don't even know what to SAY, just. archie and cook signing, and all of archie's signing STILL being in his voice, and the idols reuniting and the proposal and christ, i was so emotional over this one that after i finished the entire thing, i just wanted to stay in that world with them forever and never read the epilogue. my heart, nat. my heart.

epilogue - In a move that should be unprofessional but is instead strangely endearing, he promises me ten additional minutes of his time before excusing himself to take the call. - god, that is so cook, to make everyone fall in love with him even when he's doing something that would seem douchey coming from other celebrities. once again, your cook voice is fucking perfect, and i cannot even comprehend how well this entire thing was written.

i just, i want to make it a routine in my day to read this AT LEAST ONCE for the rest of my days on earth just because it is so beautiful and heart-wrenchingly terrific, and every single story was stand-alone but the entire work came together cohesively and, i just don't even know what to say except for thank you, thank you for writing this and sharing it and pushing through it even when things seemed insurmountable, and just, <33333

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Date: 2009-06-12 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theroseparfait.livejournal.com
Wow. Just wow. I left you a comment the other day anticipating this, and this was like, ten times better than anything I imagined. Some of these AUs are the best plots ever, and your writing style is just amazing. Are you planning on trying to get published? Your work is brilliant.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh my gosh, wow, thank you, i'm pretty sure i just sat here gaping at my laptop for the longest time. that is such an amazing compliment, thank you! i don't have any plans at the moment, but it's definitely something i've been thinking about for a long time; if an opportunity presents itself at the right time, i'll be all set. ;)

again, thank you so much for reading this, and for the lovely feedback!
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Date: 2009-06-26 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
hee! thank you so much!

Date: 2009-06-12 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] retice.livejournal.com
So, [livejournal.com profile] fallenangels607 suggested I just send our conversation to you as a comment, because I honestly can't be any more eloquent right now, omh.

becca (9:22:08 PM): SPEAKING OF READING
becca (9:22:11 PM): READ
becca (9:22:12 PM): NAT'S
becca (9:22:13 PM): FIC
becca (9:22:28 PM): IT'S 21,000 WORDS, MADE ME CRY, IT'S AN EPIC AU
toni (9:23:05 PM): OMG IS IT SAD?
toni (9:23:17 PM): OMG I LOVE HER WRITING BUT I WONT BE ABLE TO READ IT IF IT HAS A SAD ENDING BB
becca (9:23:19 PM): NO IT'S BEAUTIFUL
toni (9:23:22 PM): OH GOOD
becca (9:23:25 PM): IT IS
becca (9:23:26 PM): SO EPIC

becca (9:24:17 PM): IT IS. INCREDIBLE.

toni (9:34:57 PM): "I guess I can stand looking like a preppy school boy for one night," he says, good-naturedly.

"Um," Archie says, as he follows David out the door. "I - don't schools have, like, age limits or something?"

toni (9:34:59 PM): AHAHAHAHAHA
toni (9:35:00 PM): NAILED.
becca (9:35:20 PM): OMG THIS FIC <333

toni (9:37:09 PM): why is this a table for one, why does the guy react like david is talking to himself
toni (9:37:20 PM): why is david ordering for one
toni (9:37:36 PM): *FREAKS OUT*
becca (9:38:03 PM): I DIDN'T UNDERSTAND IT
becca (9:38:05 PM): IT WILL HIT YOU
becca (9:38:07 PM): VERY SOON
becca (9:38:13 PM): AND THEN YOU'LL HAVE TO RE-READ WHAT YOU'VE ALREADY READ
toni (9:38:47 PM): CLEARLY ARCHIE APPARENTLY ISN'T THERE THOUGH
toni (9:38:48 PM): IS HE DEAD
becca (9:39:29 PM): JUST KEEP READING
toni (9:41:09 PM): "Yeah," Jason agrees. "The whole 'I'm dating a guy that only I can see' thing is getting pretty old, man."
toni (9:41:11 PM): AHHHHH

toni (9:48:07 PM): OH MY GOD I'M SO GLAD HE WASNT DEAD
toni (9:48:09 PM): AUGH ;o;
zip (9:48:15 PM): TONI
zip (9:48:19 PM): SPOILER ALERT
toni (9:48:31 PM): I'M SORRY BUT I'M SO NOT SORRY

becca (9:49:30 PM): TONI
becca (9:49:33 PM): I HAVE TO TELL YOU
becca (9:49:38 PM): THAT AU #3 IS MY FAVORITE
becca (9:49:45 PM): AND I THINK YOU'LL ENJOY IT TOO

toni (10:15:14 PM): omg Becca
toni (10:15:21 PM): I love you so much right now
rach (10:15:28 PM): *waves*
toni (10:15:40 PM): sorry, I'm reading really really awesome fanfic that Becca linked
toni (10:15:44 PM): and I might be flailing
rach (10:15:47 PM): ooohhhh
toni (10:15:49 PM): part 4 just about tore me up
toni (10:16:02 PM): I HAVE A WEAKNESS FOR COOK WITH CHILD OKAY
becca (10:17:04 PM): I TOLD YOU
becca (10:17:20 PM): I TOLD YOU THAT AU #3 (OR, I GUESS IT'S PART 4 BUT TECHNICALLY AU #3) WAS THE GREATEST
becca (10:17:22 PM): SDFLSKDFJLKDFJDFJ
becca (10:17:25 PM): IT IS SO AMAZING, JESUS.
toni (10:19:28 PM): AHHHHH
toni (10:19:31 PM): JUST IT REALLY IS
becca (10:23:19 PM): this fic is everything that is good and right in the world

toni (10:37:45 PM): OMG HE'S DEAF
toni (10:37:46 PM): sorry
becca (10:37:49 PM): I KNOW
toni (10:37:54 PM): I love getting huge flashes of insight
becca (10:37:55 PM): DID YOU READ THAT WHOLE CHAPTER
toni (10:38:00 PM): NOT YET
rach (10:38:01 PM): which one of them?
becca (10:38:01 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:02 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:03 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:03 PM): OMFG
becca (10:38:05 PM): IT'S AMAZING
toni (10:38:11 PM): OKAY OKAY HOLD ON I'M READING
becca (10:38:21 PM): (also, how RIDICULOUSLY HOT AND ANGSTY was professor/student?!?!)
toni (10:38:50 PM): MY FIRST CLUE SHOULD HAVE BEEN HIS SOUNDLESS LAUGH
toni (10:39:02 PM): BECAUSE I ACTUALLY THOUGHT TO MYSELF AS I READ IT THAT ARCHIE NEVER EVER LAUGHS SOUNDLESSLY
becca (10:41:48 PM): i love that with every new chapter, you don't know what's going on, but then it just unfolds in your mind without her ever telling you THIS IS WHAT'S HAPPENING: *EXPLAINS*
toni (10:43:32 PM): IKRRRRR

the rest

Date: 2009-06-12 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] retice.livejournal.com
toni (10:54:19 PM): BECCA
toni (10:54:22 PM): OH MY FUCKING GOD BECCA
toni (10:54:24 PM): THAT
toni (10:54:25 PM): AHHHH
becca (10:54:27 PM): RIGHT?!?!?!?
toni (10:54:28 PM): THAT THAT THAT
toni (10:54:30 PM): AHHHHHHH
becca (10:54:30 PM): FAVORITE
becca (10:54:31 PM): COOKLETA
becca (10:54:32 PM): FIC
becca (10:54:32 PM): EVER
toni (10:54:35 PM): OH MY GOD
becca (10:54:42 PM): I CRIED
becca (10:54:45 PM): AND I SQUEALED
toni (10:54:45 PM): OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE BEST ONE SO FAR, I'M GOING TO LIKE, SOB
becca (10:54:50 PM): I DID THAT
becca (10:54:54 PM): WELL, I DIDN'T SOB
becca (10:55:00 PM): BUT I TEARED UP QUITE A BIT AND THEN HAD TO DO SOME DABBING
becca (10:55:06 PM): SO AS NOT TO LET THE TEARS FALL
toni (10:55:07 PM): OH MY GOOOOD
becca (10:55:09 PM): ESPECIALLY WHEN COOK
becca (10:55:11 PM): HAD A FUCKING
becca (10:55:11 PM): DAUGHTER
becca (10:55:27 PM): WHICH IS MY #1 THING EVER SLDJFLKDFJLKDSFJLKJFK, AND THEN DEAF ARCHIE AND THE PROPOSAL JESUS CHRIST
becca (10:56:02 PM): AND, ALSO, THE CHAPTER IN TWITTER CONVERSATIONS WHATTTTTT
toni (10:56:03 PM): OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
toni (10:56:14 PM): I DON'T KNOW HOW TO RESPOND TO THIS

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Date: 2009-06-12 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mellowdee.livejournal.com
I wish I had read this slower!! TO SAVOR IT. BECAUSE OMG. IT WAS SO FANTASTIC. SO PERFECT. EACH STORY, EACH FREAKING STORY!!

I...I don't even know which one my favorite is, but I'm pretty sure that last one pretty much killed me. It was just so gorgeous. SO GORGEOUS.

I don't even have proper words to express how wonderful this truly was and how much I loved it. It was absolutely brilliant.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh my gosh, thank you so much! i'm just thrilled that you enjoyed it, really, and i have such a soft spot for that au that, even though it shouldn't, hearing that that was a favourite makes me all smiley and happy! so thank you, again! <3

Date: 2009-06-12 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] irishdf
Nat, my dear,

You're brilliant, do you know that?!? These were all so good, and just exemplify that eternal push and pull between Cook and Archie. I enjoyed the first three a great deal. Especially Archie as a kindergarten teacher. I could totally see that. And he's so great with kids. And that moment when they finally meet, and they're all sort of stunned, and like "Hi...", and the blushing and stuff. Yeah, that's the good stuff.

I had a really hard time with the fourth one. You totally did your job portraying a relationship in crisis, but man, Cook was just such an asshole in that one. I didn't even care that he was suffering, and being stubborn, because he was causing so much of it himself. Even if he felt conflicted over whether they should be together, or not, what with the gap between their ages, and the ethics of professor/student dynamics, he was still behaving *appallingly*. So you did your job there, and showed how even when he wanted to walk away, he couldn't fight the overwhelming attraction he felt for Archie. It was a real power-house, but it made my stomach-muscles clench, so I was ready for some love, and happy times.

And you delivered. And #5 just illustrated how, even though they have a mutual love for music, what really seems to pull them together, as friends, is beyond that. Cook is constantly referring, in interviews, to the fact that Archie is one of the most genuine people he knows, and how he's such a good person. I think that there are so many qualities that they each admire about the other, that even if you take music out of the equation, they would still find one another, and still share their love of music in an indirect way. Take away Archie's hearing and you still have the humour, and affection, and understanding that you have in this world. And Cook was his usual magnificent self, and I adored him so much here. And the fact that it united the BoUH, and both families, was a winner. This made me cry tears of joy, it affected me so. And Cook does so love his grand gestures, doesn't he?? Love them both sooooooooooo much. And you. Hee.

Job well done, BB. I'm just about to fall asleep at the keyboard here, so I hope that the above comment makes *some kind of sense*. Just know that I loved them all, and this is something that I'll have to come back to, again and again. So good night, and bon voyage. Safe journey on your travels. I hope that you see many wonderful things. I can't wait to hear all about it. Many thanks for posting before leaving. It really is much appreciated. Good night now. :)

Date: 2009-06-26 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh my gosh, dee. thank you so much for this! i don't even know where to begin! i'm so glad the stories made you react - that was such an important thing for me here, i think, because the writin process was so emotional, and i'm glad that seems to have translated into the fic itself, especially with the fourth and fifth aus.

thank you so much again, my dear, especially for staying up to type this out despite the exhaustion! <33333333333

Date: 2009-06-12 05:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] incoherenteye.livejournal.com
omg. this was so amazing and i don't really know how to express it. i went through so many different emotions oh. man. brilliant.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
thank you so much!

Date: 2009-06-12 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clover71.livejournal.com
hello? mike test? uhm... is this where i flail over every single part of this awesomely incredibly remarkably written story/stories and where do i even begin?

the prologue... ah that got my eyes stuck on the screen even when i have to get some sleep because i'll be going back to work in a few hours but no... i had to read and will have to rely on red bull later....

I - oh man..i'd have to be honest, me being slow had kinda made me o_O at the beginning and was already hinting on archie being either invisible or a ghost and there you go...he was a ghost and my gosh my heart was bleeding at the part when archie had gone missing for weeks and my heart nearly leaped out of my chest when cook opened the door to see archie there...oh gosh this is absolutely beautiful.

II - oh...oh... i'm so moved by this. the tweeter was a brilliant idea. and thank you for taking me on a personally guided asian tour. i probably saved lots of money, seeing asia from the comfort of my own computer chair. lol. but this was totally moving. so romantic.

III - my heart melted into a pile of unrecognizable substance (nevermind, ignore that) at this one. cook as a daddy just steals my heart away and oh my i like to hug them both. the connection archie and cook had just through phone calls was amazingly explored.

IV - denial never protects you from the heartache cook! this was remarkably written. i could so see the scenes play before me. a professor and his student. professor tries so hard to put up a wall regardless of how he feels and the student who bears the treatment and finally caves in. oh..my heart...my heart.

V - i've left comments for this already...

and here is where i make my exit. thank you so much for sharing this. with all the things that's happening to me lately, a touch of fairy tale is all i needed to bring the smile back into my heart. may we all live happily ever after.





Date: 2009-06-26 07:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh, chris, i'm so glad you liked this, especially, like you said, after everything that's been going on. *hugs you* <3333333 thank you so much for reading it, and for leaving such lovely feedback!

Date: 2009-06-12 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rajkumari905.livejournal.com
alkjfalsdkfj OH MY GOSH.

Nat, I don't even have words to tell you how COMPLETELY AMAZING this whole thing is alskfjldfkjdslfkj I love it SO much. It's just, seriously <33333333333333333333333333333. And Cook with his cell phone and and I JUST DON'T EVEN KNOW EXCEPT LOVE.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
ASFJSGSOI YOU HAVE TOLD ME PLENTY ALREADY, TRUST ME, HAVE YOU SEEN YOUR COMMENTS OF FLAIL? BECAUSE THEY ARE FREAKING AWESOME, HI. <3333333333333333

Date: 2009-06-13 02:01 am (UTC)
ext_34722: (Cookleta)
From: [identity profile] musicboxgirl.livejournal.com
MY GOD, NAT!!!!!!11 I CANNOT BEGIN TO EXPRESS WHAT JOY THIS HAS BROUGHT ME!!! I HAVEN'T FELT THIS WAY ABOUT A STORY IN A VERY, VERY LONG TIME. YOU FUCKING NAILED IT. YOU TOTALLY WIN, COOKLETA WINS, THIS FIC WINS. MY GOD! I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS!!!11

I'll try to leave some more constructive thoughts later, but honestly, I think you ROCKED it and it's A-FUCKING-MAZING.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
oh my gosh, IDEK WHAT TO SAY IN THE FACE OF ALL OF THIS. YOU ARE TOO FUCKING AWESOME FOR ME, OKAY, AND, JUST, I AM SO GLAD YOU ARE READING THIS, HONESTLY, JUST. YES. THAT YOU LIKED IT IS JUST ICING ON THE CAKE. *HUGS YOU SO FREAKING HARD*

Date: 2009-06-13 05:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] off-theground.livejournal.com
OMFG IDEK WHAT TO SAY.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
AIFSJDFGFJDH I AM JUST GLAD YOU READ THIS, BB. ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2009-06-13 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etiam-exspecto.livejournal.com
SO HI, THIS MIGHT POSSIBLY BE MY NEW FAVORITE, THE ONE I'LL PRINT OUT AND TAKE WITH ME FOREVER AND READ DURING MY BORING COMPSCI CLASSES SO I'LL FEEL WARM AND FUZZY DESPITE THE COLD LECTURE ROOM AND AHHHHH OMFG I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOO MUCH ILU YOU'RE AMAZING. ♥

Date: 2009-06-26 06:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
AISKFGDIG RAEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, WTF, OKAY, I LEGIT JUST SQUAWKED OUT LOUD AND WAVED MY HANDS AROUND, WHAT. <3333333333333333 I AM JUST GLAD YOU LIKED IT, BB.

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Date: 2009-06-13 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cabayuki.livejournal.com
SO FOR SERIOUS, WHEN I THINK YOU CAN'T GET MORE FABULOUS, YOU PROVE THE WRONG AGAIN AND AGAIN! i WENT THROUGH ALL EMOTIONS IMAGINABLE WHEN READING THIS FIC OMG XD AND YOU MIGHT NOT KNOW THIS, BUT USUALLY I DO NOT GET EMOTIONAL OVER A FIC OKAY? I CAN COUNT ON ONE HAND THE NUMBERS OF FICS THAT GOT ME MISTY EYED, AND YOURS IS ONE OF THEM NOW!

Date: 2009-06-26 06:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
OH MY GOSH, BB, YOU ARE TOO GOOD TO ME, OKAY, I AM JUST SO PLEASED YOU LIKED THIS. <333333333

Date: 2009-06-14 04:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yetunknown.livejournal.com
this was amazing. I pretty much loved all of it, I can't pick a favourite.

Date: 2009-06-26 06:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
aww, thank you! that's such a compliment, honestly!

Date: 2009-06-15 12:06 am (UTC)
ext_21616: (archie is cook's squishy)
From: [identity profile] pandorablu.livejournal.com
oh bb this was absolutely wonderful. I especially loved AU3. Cook and kids makes me go all AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. And AU5 made me all wibbly. :)

Date: 2009-06-26 06:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicflailer.livejournal.com
aww, thank you! i'm really glad you liked it! :D
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