MASTER POST: Like All Good Fairytales
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Title: Like All Good Fairytales (this one starts with once upon a time)
Pairing: David Archuleta/David Cook
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Ridiculously, ridiculously AU.
Word count: ~21,000
Summary: Five lifetimes David and David would have fallen in love.
Artist(s): The fan-fucking-tabulous
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ciudad, who ninja-ed in here and gave me the best damn surprise I have ever gotten out of a story, ever, WITH NOT ONLY ART BUT ALSO AN. ENTIRE. SOUNDTRACK (YOU WANT TO BE CHECKING THAT OUT, TRUST ME), oh my god, and then seemed shocked when I wanted to show it off to every freaking human being on the planet. Shocked. Jesus Christ, woman, the amount of sheer joy you bring into my life is untouchable. Thank you, thank you, thank you.The unbelievable
starafar has also chipped in with a digital scrapbook accompaniment, jfc. You guys, I cannot even believe my life right now. This scrapbook fucking floors me every time, and the pages take my breath away, AND YOU KNOW YOU DON'T WANT TO MISS COOK IN A PINK SHIRT, GOD.i. snow white fell in love with dopey
ii. cinderella realized that happily ever after takes work
iii. peter pan grew up
iv. prince charming found that sleeping beauty was a different person awake
v. the little mermaid never got to sing
epilogue: and they lived happily ever after
I'm dedicating this story to my incredible, incredible wife,
hopefulgenius, who was a bigger inspiration for my finishing this than she will ever know. I wrote the entire last section of the story with her in mind, and I -- without a doubt, it is the story I'm proudest of ever writing. Meg, darling, god I adore you. I hope when you read this you know that that is how you make me feel every day, and then some. Acknowledgements: That said, this was a strangely difficult big bang to write. I began it initially for
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dvbb, but when that challenge went out the window, I decided that the rest of the stories needed to be written anyway. I didn't manage to post this by the original deadline, unfortunately, but the fact that I posted it at all is thanks mainly to all the awesome people who've been encouraging me and holding my hand to get me through this.First up,
starafar deserves the hugest hugs and candy bars in the world for offering major hand-holding, being the best sounding board in the world (half the ideas in this thing I totally stole off you), for helping me out in every way possible (twitter forever!) and constantly telling me that this story did not suck like a hoover (which, total lie, BUT IT IS THE THOUGHT THAT COUNTS). You've seen me at my worst and the fact that you didn't go running for the hills means you get extra, extra, extra kudos! <3333333333Crazy amazing thanks must also go out to
greensounds, x a billion, because honest-to-god, she probably fixed half the story, and saved the rest of it, and her constant cheerleading was the most amazing boost in the world. I am spoilt for life, now that I have had her last minute betas for pretty much every piece of fanfiction I've put up that needed a beta. A lot of the revamping that went into the story is completely thanks to you, and I am much, much more satisfied with the final product than the initial one.Much love also goes out to
bubbleforest, who helped me out in a major way by looking over the sections I was having problems with, and pointing out things that would probably not have made any lick of sense otherwise, and then heaping all this crazy praise on it that IT TOTALLY DID NOT DESERVE. And the best part is that SHE IS NOT EVEN IN THE FANDOM. You are the bestest, bb, idk what I did to deserve you. ♥I must also send a billion, trillion, gazillion thank yous out to
pixiebeanz, infiniteskies, rajkumari905, jehane18, mausi, irishdf and slashophile for their undying patience and faith and encouragement. I honestly don't know where I would be without everyone of you in my life. Also, to everyone who read this and left comments, thank you. You don't know how much this story means. If I have neglected to mention your name here, it is only because I am lame and stupid, but know that I am so very, very grateful for everything.
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Date: 2009-06-11 07:59 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-06-11 08:45 pm (UTC)And hi, everything you write (past, present and future) is awesome. The word 'suck' isn't in your vocabulary, my dear.
Hiiii, I adore you. And I'll go check out the epicness now. ♥
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Date: 2009-06-26 06:19 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-06-11 09:12 pm (UTC)uh.
that's all. woot.
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Date: 2009-06-12 07:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-26 06:21 am (UTC)and without your help this story would have been rubbish, hi.
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Date: 2009-06-12 12:08 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-06-12 12:43 am (UTC)I love how you have wrapped them together, all of them having the same subject line yet being different. Going through real life, a Just Like Heaven inspired fic, Archie being a kindergarden teacher, Archie being deaf, Cook being a university teacher, Cook being a photographer, it was a ride, and a wonderful one. I loved how you gave them their own voices throughout the different parts, how they sounded like themselves yet different because in each one they got to be another character, with other thoughts and background, more mature, more childish, a father, a lover, a fucking twit, a loving musician.
You just own my heart and soul after this. It was clever, it was brilliant and totally deserving of an award. If we ever get around to set up a Cookleta Fic Awards Gala, I am nominating you with this. I thought it would be hard to top your other stories I liked (like, all of them?) and I always thought it would only be you making me fall for yet another story. I wasn't wrong. And here I am, at 2:34 am, getting up in less than four hours, reading and commenting while trying to stop crying like the fool I am because you got to me.
I particularly loved the part where Cook teaches at university and Archie is his student. There was so much raw pain there, so much feeling, I could identify with it, not because I slept with my teacher, but because I react exactly the same as Archie does when I'm under that kind of pressure. And the one about Archie taking care of Trina was simply perfect.
There is an ongoing theme here, and I'm not sure if you realized it or not (maybe it's just me). It's all about what Cook can't see in David, every single time. He doesn't see Archie when he disappears after waking up in the hospital. He doesn't see Archie when he is traveling through Asia. He doesn't see who the real Archie is until it is almost too late and he has to beg through a phone call (best last line ever). He actually never sees Archie while he is too busy turning Bill Gates down for his child. And he only sees Archie, fully, perfectly, when he manages to get him under a spotlight and see him trembling at his declaration (and possibly career suicide)
What I mean is that your story got to me in more ways than one, it ran deep inside of me, and that's why I am analyzing every little bit, yearning to quote but it would only make this longer than it already is, and I seriously don't want to bore you to death or to make you think I am a crazy stalker or something (I am not, promise, I am just weird)
I wish I had your way with words and your magic with plots. And I sincerely wish I hadn't promised to finish my own
I have recced this. Like, twice. Hope you don't mind.
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Date: 2009-06-17 05:46 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-26 06:32 am (UTC)i'm just, i'm speechless, because i didn't even realize that about the ongoing theme. any kind of fb is always totally welcome, and this comment is so, so lovely and sweet that i might just have to frame it for times i need an ego boost, or something. just - thank you so much, and i hope you did finish your dvbb, because a) cookmann! and b) we can never have too much fic! comparisons aren't necessary at all! :D i bet yours will be brilliant!
and also, wow, again, because - thank you so much for the recs! i'm legit blushing over here. thank you.
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Date: 2009-06-26 06:34 am (UTC)And I did finish my Cookmann, LOL and posted it a week ago. Sadly, last night I locked it on my writing journal, but if you're interested I could point you there...
*hugs*
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Date: 2009-06-28 07:11 am (UTC)aaaaaaand it would be awesome if you did that! i can't wait to read it, seriously! it is going to be EPIC!
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Date: 2009-06-28 07:14 pm (UTC)I don't know if you're friends with my writing journal,
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Date: 2009-06-29 04:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-12 04:54 am (UTC)Honestly, words fail me... but I will try to express how much I love this story (or series of stories).
First, I love that we get to watch how, even in different fictons, the irresistible pull is there. Sometimes healthy, sometimes not, but always INTENSE.
And then I love how IC you keep the boys, even as you torque their lives into wildly different configurations.
I LOVE the dialog, the simplicity carrying a heavy freight of emotion, often in the most subtle gestures and words, beautiful.
I LOVE Cook as an over-protective Dad of a cutely manipulative sweetie, and Archie as a kindergarten teacher? Epic Win!
Oh, and the last story... Cook asking if Archie rang for a translator, why he knew Sign... the connection, each small moment drawing them closer and closer.
Oh my heart. It feels so full...
This is a truly magnificent achievment darling.
Love,
Renata
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Date: 2009-06-12 07:46 am (UTC)And oh my God, I only gave it the praise it DESERVES, you crazy lady. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Date: 2009-06-26 06:25 am (UTC)(btw, i totally got your hug from anneka, hi! <333333)
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Date: 2009-06-13 08:11 pm (UTC)YOU POSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111
OMG, I MIGHT HAVE JUST SQUEED OUT LOUD AT MY LAPTOP.
21000 WORDS, FUUUUCK, YOU ARE SO AMAZING, YOU KNOW THAT. AMAZING.
EXPECT TRUCKLOADS OF FEEDBACK COMING YOUR WAY IN THE NEAR FUTURE.
I HOPE YOU ARE GETTING SOME WELL DESERVED REST NOW, BB.
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Date: 2009-06-26 06:26 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-06-26 06:27 am (UTC)BUT, SO GOOD LUCK, BB, YOU WILL DO AMAZING, I KNOW YOU WILL. <3333333333333333333333333333
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Date: 2009-07-02 02:42 am (UTC)at first i was confused when i read that cook is a tattooist in the 2nd story whereas he is a rock star in the 1st story so i had to re-read the master post summary to get that this is kinda the "5 things" writing but in longer than drabble format; which is totally encourage by the way :p
i gotta say, your writing blow me away. every sentence is executed aptly, which in turn exude and deliver the intended emotion in max. i never want the story to end. i want to stay and just be with your character!
that's why i'll go find other stories you ever written (preferably cookleta) and immerse myself in it. right after i post this :p
also, i'm charm by the chapter title! it's precious :)
among the 5 (6?) stories, my favorite are snow white fell in love with dopey and prince charming found that sleeping beauty was a different person awake. both beginning of the stories had me confuse but it's AMAZING when i finally get it! which of course, prompt me to re-read again to savor the story in a different light :D i ♥ that feeling.
my favorite part in "snow white":
and he'd just wanted to get home, to say, it's okay. Even if you forget, I won't. I see you. GUH. the feeling in this is so palpable and gives me shivers.
and in "prince charming", i'm totally sold by your portrayal of asshole!cook. the way you presented the state of his mind is AMAZING! OKAY! it's so so easy to hate him but at the same time it's the most captivating traits of him. i couldn't look away! his misery is fascinating and self-consuming! he burn so prettily. ahem. okay so, maybe i'm a little twisted BUT ... *sheepish smile*
still, it's a good shift at the end. "Hey," he says, swallows hard. "I - it's really good to hear your voice." a breath of new beginning. i hope he got his happy ending :D
also, i really like the recurring theme in all the stories (dublin, living together, pad thai, etc). the parallel of each universe. that somehow, no matter where or who they are, both cook and archie are inevitably gravitating to each other. and also, somehow retain their basis personality and quirks that make them fit. and you executed this brilliantly. with just enough hint for the readers to conclude themselves. i love writers that threat their readers as intellectually capable! :D
p/s: i found this via delicious bookmark. and it'll go to mine too!
p/p/s: sorry for the long ramble o.O
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Date: 2009-07-02 04:38 am (UTC)thank you so much for reading! i'm really glad you enjoyed this (and the titles, score!) and asshole!cook was probably one of my favourite parts of the story to write, albeit the most painful, so i totally get where you're coming from and i'm thrilled you had fun with it! hee!
p.s. and thank you for the delicious rec! ;D
p.p.s also never feel the need to apologize for leaving pieces of feedback! especially long, rambly ones!
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Date: 2009-08-02 08:45 am (UTC)*hugs* Off to read! Idk how many I'll get through tonight but I'm leaving comments after every one, DANG IT.